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Kia Ora Inotia,I Like How You Planned your out your Writing. You Could Improve on Adding More Writing And Keep UP the Great Work from Mya
Hi InotiaI liked how you showed your explaining and who made the Biscuits.I think you could improve on double check your punctuation becuase there maybe be some mistakes but other than that Great Work
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Kia Ora Inotia,
ReplyDeleteI Like How You Planned your out your Writing. You Could Improve on Adding More Writing And Keep UP the Great Work
from Mya
Hi Inotia
ReplyDeleteI liked how you showed your explaining and who made the Biscuits.I think you could improve on double check your punctuation becuase there maybe be some mistakes but other than that Great Work