Narrative Writing

A day to remember

April 13 1915 in the trenches you can see Jacob with an injured knee but it's healing alright.  Jack, Austin, Mack, Jacob, Tyler, Braylin and I were planning to have a stroll at midnight for Mack’s birthday.  Jack was a good doctor because he was studying how to  be one before he joined the army.  We were quite worried for Jacob because we might get caught from our enemies.  

During our walk Jacob trips and landed on his knee real bad and then the enemies heard and saw Jacob on the floor.  He got up as quick as he could but then they shot both of his shoulders.  We ran and carried him on our shoulders.  He was losing a lot of blood but we weren't close to our trenches where the bandages were.  Jack decided to help and asked if anyone has a badge but Braylin decided to use his t-shirt.  As soon as he took it off there was a line on his chest which meant he had rheumatic fever.  Jack knew it meant he had rheumatic fever and asked him did he know about this the whole time and his reply was yes.  Braylin said that he didn’t want to get sent home so he didn’t tell them.  Later they just focused on how to help Jack.  

They ran back to their trenches, it was a long run for them.  As soon as they got there Braylin collapsed as soon as they got there.  We tried to wake him up  but there was no reply.  Jack said that he is dead!  Then we all buried him.  Jack took the two bullets out of Jacob.  Jacob was healing nice and quickly.

Independent Writing W5 T2

All About Me

All About Me

My name is Inotia, I have a big family and I am 10 years old. I am a student of PBS and I am a year 6 this year.  I want to explain important parts of myself like my family, friends and hobbies. This is a picture of me when I was 8 years old.

My family is the most important thing in my life because they are there to encourage me to do something I have never done before and keep on trying and always keep me entertained when I’m bored.  The members in my family are my 5 silly brothers, 1 sister and my parents.  

My hobbies are reading, sports, running and athletics.  I enjoy running because it cheers me up and gets me up and active.  I love athletics because it is full of challenging goals for me to aim and its gets us cheered and active.

My third thing that is the most important thing in my life is my Pet and Friends.  I have many friends from other places like my athletics after school and at Swimming classes and from School.  Most of my friends from school have different nationalities for an example Samoa, Niue and Palagi.  My friends names from school are Mia, Javeylor, Jasmine, Angari and Mya and my friends names from Athletics is Ashleigh, Avala, Leila, Lucy, Hatty, Maddie and Amelia.  Lastly my Cat’s name is Shepard and he is a male

I was born in NZ but my culture is Kiribati because both of my parents are born in Kiribati.  My full name is Inotia Mitchelle Abera Katarake,  Mitchelle is my nickname.  I sort of feel like a Kiwi in NZ and sometimes don’t because I speak more of my language.  I also feel like a Kiwi because I know more facts about NZ than Kiribati.

I Know Someone Poem

I Know Someone Poem

I know someone who can touch their nose on their knees.

I know someone who can hold the elbow handstand more that 10 seconds!

I know someone who can stuff more than 7 marshmallows in their mouth.

I know someone who can bend their thumb to touch their wrist

I know someone who can make their eyes turn white.

I know someone who can put one leg behind their neck, and that someone is ME!!

Mercury Adventure

This is my pic-a-path about Mercury. I didn't do it by myself but my classmate Ana buddied up with me and made it together.

How Can I Manage Myself

This is a google slide show to present how can you or I can manage ourself.  Hope you enjoy:)

How to write a paragragh

This is a presentation that shows how you can write a perfect paragragh.

Ant and the Grasshopper retold with only 5 sentences

This was a reading activity, which we had to retell the story with only 5 sentences.

Maui and the sun

I made a google drawing which I had to retold Maui and the Sun in my own words.

Migration

If I was migrating I would migrate to Australia because it is peaceful and I would like to go to all the shops and restaurants.  I would like to go there because my friends and family are there and I would like to visit them some day

Continent Country City Town

My Holiday At Hastings

Last Friday I went to Hastings to see my cousins.  It was a seven hour drive that each one of us slept over four hours.  When we got there we got given lollies.  We slept very late because we slept at two o'clock in the morning.  We went to the park in the morning then the next day we went to church with my nana.  On Sunday our final day at Hastings we had a BBQ with some of my other cousins and my Uncle plays rugby that he has a game. My dad and brother Christopher went to watch him. My Uncles friend came to pick him up but they stayed a short time and we played with their puppy, it was a Rottweiler.  When it was night we played one last game before we go home.  We played hide and seek in the dark so it could be more fun and challenging.  When we hid behind the gate there was a big dog barking at us and we were really afraid.  Then we left.

What I learned this week.

This week I learned what inference mean. Inference means a reader makes a guess on what happens next on a story by getting clues from what they read. If you want to know more you can click on this link. 

My Alphabet Key

This is a presentation that I did that is based on what I did in the holiday. We had to write all the things that we did in the holidays that has the all the letters of the alphabet.

How to annoy your teacher

Yesterday we were learning to write instructions. We learned that for instructions they have to start with a bossy verb.

How to

annoy your teacher

• Make funny noises when your teacher is writing, but don’t get caught
• Sleep in class either if you’re watching a movie or when you sit at the back of the class
• Don't listen while your teacher is writing
• Laugh loudly when someone tells you a joke on the mat
• Read quietly when you are doing maths but make it obvious
• Comment on everything your teacher says
• Look like you’re listening to your teacher but talk to your friends a lot
• Wiggle your chair to side to side
• GET READY TO GO TO THE PRINCIPAL’S OFFICE!!

Can you think of another way to annoy your teacher?

Late for school excuses

Late for school Excuses

• Dad’s car broke down
• I was looking for my netbook
• I was watching t.v.
• I was playing on my xbox 360
• I slept in
• I was looking for my lost dog
• I  had to walk to school when it is  was  8.30
• my  mum’s  key  got lost  for the car
• I was listening to music on my netbook
• I slept  at  10   o'clock  last night
• my alarm clock was broken so  I woke up late
• I forgotten to set my alarm clock to 8 o’clock
• I had  to  look for my netbook charger because my netbook was flat
• My mum and dad  had a fight  so  i  came to school late

What if bees were as big as cats

What if bees were as big as cats

If bees were as big as cats, bees would be harmful and if people try to capture or hunt them down bees could sting them. Also if there were big bees we would get lots of honey but it would also be a lot of hard work to get all the honey from the beehive because bees can sting us. If there were big bees in the world  people will kill them and then we would have no honey in the world. It would also be cool to have big bees in the world because once they're bigger you could have them as a pet and go on them and fly around wherever you want to go.

My comment on room 7

This is a blog comment that I made on Room 7. I also liked their blog post because I actually learned how to count in other countries.

Name Totems

My Name Totems

In the first week of school, we made Name Totems.  I learned how to reflect the letters of my name.  I also learned what was hot and cold colour.  My Name Totem was a cool colour but I accidently made my Taniwha Face a hot colour.

Book Review on Meet me In Horrorwood

I read this book and I think its more likely for girls. Its about Creepella's pet monster Gorgo is sad because he wants to see his love again